A demonstration of erotic hypnosis leads to two relationships, one
inspiring and creative, the other abusive and destructive.
Darren Braid was a respected psychology professor until a student accused
him of trying to hypnotize her into sexual slavery. The accusation was
recanted, but the university dismissed him anyway. Feeling betrayed, Darren
retreated into seclusion. But the FBI believes that his exceptional skill with
hypnosis and his tainted personal history make him the perfect undercover agent
to infiltrate a sex slavery ring.
Latoya Douglas works for the studio that’s fronting the slavery ring.
She is a beautiful black woman and one of L.A.’s hottest rap producers. Latoya
will do almost anything to support her artists. She decides to 'manage' Darren,
and remake him into an evil mind-controlling genius. She becomes his lover and
muse. She inspires and helps Darren produce a hypnosis program to make women
eager for sex with her rappers, and she helps find women to test the program.
After three years of solitude, Darren finds the relationship more inspiring and
rewarding than anything he imagined. But he doesn’t know if he can trust her.
Is she part of the slavery ring, or trying to find her missing sister?
Marisa Martinez is a
hotheaded young FBI agent. She asks Darren to hypnotize her to act submissive
and obedient so she can get close to the slavers. But the hypnotic programming
works too well. Marisa is in danger of losing herself to the submissive role
and becoming a mindless sex toy. Can Darren restore her mind before she’s
actually sold into sexual slavery?
EXCERPT:
"In fact, we're conducting a market focus group right now.
If you're interested, I can ask Darren if you can speak with the focus group.
You … "
"No need to trouble yourself. I'll just surprise him."
He stood and left the office as if she didn't exist.
Latoya rushed after him. "Mr. Breaux, you can't just walk
in on a hypnosis session. You should let me check to see if the ladies can be
questioned at this time."
She didn't give him a chance to reply, but rushed on to the
conference room. She opened the door quietly. Darren was talking casually with
the three female agents. They were standing very close, as if the women were
just barely resisting the desire to touch his body.
Latoya mouthed the phrase "he's here" and waved for
the ladies to move in tighter. Then summoning as much false indignation as she
could, "Mr. Braid! This is a place of business, what do you think you're
doing?"
Darren dived into a chair and the three ladies scrambled into
position around him; one on his lap, one rubbing his shoulders, and one
kneeling at his side caressing his arms.
"Mr. Braid," Latoya continued. "I know your
stories can arouse intense sexual desires. But you must control yourself here.
You can't take advantage of these women." The girl on his lap unbuttoned
her blouse just before Breaux stepped up behind Latoya.
"The ladies are just helping me with the market
research," Darren smiled like a flamboyantly arrogant rock star.
"Aren't you ladies?"
My name is Daniel, though I use the name Hypnotic Dreams as my
'brand' and my pseudonym. I hold a BS in Engineering and an MS in Technical
Communication. I worked as a contract technical writer for 17 years, which gave
me a broad range of experiences in several different industries.
I began studying hypnosis in the 1990s and joined the
online erotic hypnosis community in 1998. Redemption for the
Hypnotist is my first full-length novel. I also have produced 19
hypnosis MP3s, which are available on my web site.
SLAVE's Review:
When
I initially started this book, I was immediately taken aback, and turned off
for what a thought was a blatant attack on women and I was only on page 2. That was
definitely not my cup of tea so I put it down. After two days I had to tell myself
that there was no way the publishers would promote such trash. I must have
taken it wrong or something. So I settled in and gave it another try. And to my
relief, this story was not about hypnotizing unknowing, unwilling girls, and
making them your 'fuck toys', but about infiltrating a modern day sex slave
ring.
Now
with that being said, Redemption for the
Hypnotist turned out to actually be a good read. The author meshed an FBI
case easily within his story. Now, the only problem I had was the involvement
of a citizen, Darren, the male lead, in such a dangerous case simply because he
was the leading agent’s cousin who needed to get out of the house. But then why
not, I guess.
Once
the story got moving I enjoyed all the characters. Darren is the hypnotist. Though he longs for his solitude, he saves
a few would-be sex slaves and has some major fun while doing it. The lead
female, Latoya, was a thrill to
read. I enjoyed that she actually likes to be hypnotized for the different
sexual experiences. Marisa, the
under-cover agent, I actually felt sorry for, because though she's a tough no-nonsense
agent, she really takes to being hypnotized, and almost lost who she really
was.
I
really enjoyed this story and was glad I gave it another try. 4 pens for this book by Hypnotic Dream and I look forward to reading more of this author’s work.
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ReplyDeleteInteresting and good review. This is really a different story line. It does appear that the reviewer did like it.
ReplyDeleteHi Slave,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the review. I'm sorry you had difficulty with the first chapter. Part of the difficulty of writing for two different audiences is that not everyone is going to like every part of a book. When I first started writing, it was for people who enjoy reading erotic mind control stories. The romance of the novel developed as I was writing.
But I'm glad you liked the characters. When the reader cares about the characters, it means the writer has done his job well. The fact that you cared enough about Marisa to feel sorry for her means I did a good job of writing her.
-Daniel